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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Feb 15, 2006 4:14:18 GMT -5
comon la,i m also writin stories as well.....i m a writer n guess wat : i m writin a realli kool story n i hav it on winglin......but top secret,visit www.winglin.net/fanfic/wanyanbupo 2 noe more abt tis story i wrote |
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miracle
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Post by miracle on Feb 16, 2006 7:04:15 GMT -5
oh that great i will visit the wedsite to noe more  |
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Post by miracle on Feb 16, 2006 7:29:41 GMT -5
my date with vampire 4 -fate is back again- chapter 3.... tonite everyone gather at waiting bar.....(mao u,xiaoling,renwang,tianyou,bupo) they went to the place where jiangchen dwell with rewang leading the way, soon they reached the top of world trade centre.suddenly a mysyerious person charge at the 5 of them . mao yu and xiaoling fell on the floor and was knock out....... Jiangchen:hi , tianyou,renwang,we have meet again, but sry friends i have to kill u for the sake of Nuwa.....Jiang chen say in a explosive manner:Uderstand!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bupo:r u sure u have to pass the three of us first,uderstand? jiang chen:u wan to test me!! jiang chen charged wif fast speed at bupo with a punch.....bupo manage to use his punch tackle but was knock on the floor.As jiangchen force was too strong for him....................... tis time mao u and xiao ling wake up...xiaoling did not use sheng long as she wAS TOO WEAK TOO exert her force. the three of them watch the fight betweem jiang chen ,ren wang .tianyou. the three of them r equally good. suddenly a grey force(fate) appear and went into Jiang chen body.Jiang chen aim straight at tianyou wif a blow . but ren wang help tianyou tacke it and die from it. jiang chen:ren wang u cant defeat me ...and tianyou u cant too.from ren wang body, jiang chen took away the earth book(left by yao chi sheng mu) and the human book(left by lord di zhang wang) plus eternal lock.... Jiangchen:tianyou y r u so weak, defeat me plz or else i cant stop..Because of Nuwa. i letting u go today as i give u a chance to defaeat me. jiang chen dissapeared into thin air. |
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Post by miracle on Feb 16, 2006 7:30:46 GMT -5
this is my date with vampire 4 -fate is back again- the version i concluded....to be continued ,any comment tell me.
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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Mar 2, 2006 2:52:37 GMT -5
fate has return,fate has return,fate has return.
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Post by miracle on Mar 20, 2006 8:56:35 GMT -5
after being defeated by jiangchen.the four of them went back to watiting with injuries.
tianya:how r all of yr?
xiaoling :tianya go get the first aid from the kitchen...
tianya :yes mon.
tianyou:even renewang was not his match, look like we r not able to defeat jiangchen.
the four of them look frustrated.....
after jiang chen had defeated tianyou and had kill renwang....he went to meet fate.
Jiangchen:fate come out.
a purple force appear...
jiang chen:this is the eternal lock . earth and human book i get from renwang body.
fate : good u had defeated renwang and there is now less obstacle for us to reach our goal..
hand the eternal lock to me the rest u may keep it...and u mu st help me capture tianya and bring her to me.
jiang chen:so yr goal is eternal state?
fate:yes.now go and do it as iwill help u revive nuwa after u had gather all the blood of humans.the blood of all humans is similar to nuwa so to revive her we will need it.
after hearing tis jiang chen immediately wen to complete his task while fate dissapeared into thin air........
the next morning tianya wen to buy some beer as instructed by xiaoling......on the way jiang chen dashed straight on her.suddenly a man wen and pushed her away.
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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Apr 7, 2006 23:24:38 GMT -5
ok......miracle, can i use tis chapter (or story) in my story  |
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miracle
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Post by miracle on Apr 11, 2006 9:44:48 GMT -5
mmm.....nope!u should write yr own style of story......i think u had more better ideas rite?
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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Apr 14, 2006 9:36:09 GMT -5
actually, i m stuck !!! ask jingyi 4 more info
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miracle
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Post by miracle on Apr 14, 2006 11:55:39 GMT -5
well.........okex...........
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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Apr 14, 2006 18:30:11 GMT -5
thanx,miracle,i'll add u down e acknowledgement section after e world story
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wendy
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tinking of tian you...
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Post by wendy on Apr 15, 2006 4:43:00 GMT -5
tats a good story.. can put in forum ba.. hahaa..
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wendy
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tinking of tian you...
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Post by wendy on Apr 16, 2006 1:08:05 GMT -5
muz ask wenwen they all.. haha
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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Apr 16, 2006 2:56:15 GMT -5
thanx again,miracle.....nw i just havda wait till fanfic is back-on-track
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Post by miracle on Apr 16, 2006 7:02:46 GMT -5
u r welcome.......hahas  |
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