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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Jan 11, 2006 2:04:54 GMT -5
can some1 contribute some ideas 2 "chapter 7-sky return (part 2)",i seem 2 b stuck continuin tis chapter
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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Jan 16, 2006 5:04:03 GMT -5
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Post by scott on Feb 3, 2006 2:45:53 GMT -5
mary (last time like fu sheng in mdwav2)
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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Feb 3, 2006 8:57:29 GMT -5
oh..her..y ??
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Post by Miracle on Feb 9, 2006 10:54:30 GMT -5
must also add the character renwang(king of mankind) also........
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Post by Miracle on Feb 9, 2006 10:56:46 GMT -5
must also add later sky and tianya fall in love together....
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Post by Miracle on Feb 9, 2006 11:09:10 GMT -5
this i a version i concluded: jiang chen wanted to revive nuwa... but in order to did it he need to collect the blood of all beings.............renwang wanted to stop all this fight with jiang chen
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Post by Miraclesi am shi hao on Feb 10, 2006 10:27:37 GMT -5
alright i tell u more:
tis is the version iconcluded, (My date with vampire 3 -Fate is back again-). chapter one.........everybody thought that the fate had alredy perished againwith yaochi sheng Mu but it had not. because the greed of humans do not perish. Fate will revive again after 1 year!!! human and gods will have to deal with it again.
tis time fate had come for revenge. fate revive Jiang Chen and made use of him by telling him that he had to kill tianyou xiao ling so that he will be able to collect the blood of all beings to revive his lover nuwa. even though jiang chen and tianyou are good friends but for the sake of nuwa , he is willing to kill tianyou. ren wang wanted to save the world by stoping jiang chen.although ren wng ang jiang chen were members of pangu.but fate use increased power to back up jiangchen. jiang chen become so powerful that with a blow he kill ren wang. from renwang body , jiang chen found the yong heng xin xuo eternal lock. fate not even wan to made use of jiang chen to kill humans but also wan to enter eternal state too. by doing this he had to made use of Tianya again.
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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Feb 10, 2006 19:09:19 GMT -5
hmm......nice chapter,but can u post it in a more excitin n narrative way |
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Post by Miracle on Feb 11, 2006 9:53:37 GMT -5
:)eh that is introduction ....so a bit boring lah Hahax
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Post by dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie on Feb 11, 2006 20:13:53 GMT -5
k....keep updatin.
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Post by Miracle on Feb 11, 2006 21:17:19 GMT -5
My Date with Vampire 4 -Fate is back--Chapter 1
after some years tian you and xiaoling visit earth in order to visit their friends. they also bring along their children tian ya( 16 yrs old) and tian le(7yrs)TOgether.....
Soon they reached the door of waiting bar........Fusheng opened the door and shouted "tian you ge , xiao ling jie!long time no see!!yr are finally back....why do yr leave the other time without informing anyone, during tis period of time all of our friends miss yr alot>>>
tianyou smile and said: ...sry fusheng.... the other time we were invited by Pangu again to stay in heaven........so I and xiao ling decided that we visit our friends on earth after some time.
atonished fusheng said: Pangu...no way the Pangu clan perish already mah.?
xiao ling: no lah ..actually the pangu clan did not perish at all.
Tianyou:in order to trick fate in to believing that Yaochi sheng Mu had kill the Pangu clan,Members of Pang gu fake death...and hide themselves in a chamber until Fate is destroyed>>>
Fusheng:looks like Pangu clan will not be destory butsince they are so invincble why the panggu elder did not deal with fate himself.?
xioling:we did not noe either maybe pangu elder had his own reasons.
tian you : At first i and xiao ling cant belived it too as we had all thought that Pangu had perished alredy..........
Fusheng: well enough of talking lets come in and have a drink, what will u like for drink?
tian you and xiao ling: anything.
this time Fusheng noticed the children behind xiaoling and tian you as they come in...
fusheng: hi tianya how are u ? rememder me...
Tianya:hi fusheng but tis is only the first time we met leh...
fusheng:who is tis cute and fat boy >>>refering to tian le
tian you: this is my son tianle....I and xiaoling had a wedding ceremony oraganised by Pangu clan and we had gave birth to tian ya and tian le..
fusheng : o that great yr had finally came truth....congratulateions to both of u...........
tianyou and xiaoling:thanks!
tian you and xiao ling smile at each other asthey were both glad that they were able to overcome the problems they had faced together and get married..
fusheng go and get some drinks for the both of them and called all their friends to come to waiting bar for the celebrations of xiaoling and tianyou coming back ,AT tonight...while doing tis he thought to himself as to how can the tianya now look so much as the tianya in the past.....suddenly he felt that he had a crash with her.......
FOR Chapter 2 i will concluded the next time
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Post by Miracle on Feb 11, 2006 21:23:54 GMT -5
well i have done my best;;haha;;Hope tis is a ok version.. any comments can tell me......
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Post by miracle on Feb 12, 2006 6:15:07 GMT -5
My Date with Vampire 4 -Fate is back again-
tonight, everybody headed to waiting bar follow by Mao u,Bu po ,zheng zhong and Miaow~ie. the 8 of them chatted amoug themselves happily.........
xiao ling:where Sky?
Fusheng: we were unable to contact sky as he look quite dissapointed 4 the last time we seen him.
Fusheng: i think it is the dissaperance of tianya lah
tianya was atonished
tianya:what me!
fusheng:Ops nothing.
tianya felt a bit uneasy as she had a sad feeling when she heard about the name of sky, she felt familar with the name.
After the party everyone went back.
Suddenly some vampires come after all of them left.xiaoling using her powers kill all of them.
tianyou:these pity vampires r still raoming aroubd the world after yr 2001. even fate had been destroyed they r still around sucking blood of humans.
xiao ling:these were the doings of Jiang Chen in yr 2000.
tianyou :howover there are still some Kind hearted vampire whom do not suck human blood for example Bupo.
xiaoling: ya u r right.
tianyou family had their night at waiting bar.
tianyou: gd nite xiaoling ,tianya ,tian le..
xiaoling: nite
tian ya and tian le: pa pa mama gd nite.
the next morning , while they were doing business a customer with familar voice came ....
REn wang:halo everyone
tianyou: huh renwang
xiaoling:wat bring u here?
renwang :i jus wan to visit my friends only haha; as i heard that yr had come to visit earth from the pangu of heaven....bvut there a thing in which invloves the two of yr and yr friends,the defaet of Jiang Chen.
xiaoling and tian you were surprise.
tianyou:Jiang chen had been dead.
rewang :i noe but....recently there had been the apperance of Jiang chen biting humans which means that Jiang chen had been revive..this is the second time he betrayed pangu again. pangu had give permission to subdue him.
tianyou: dun tell me that it was all pangu plan for us to defeated Jiang chen.
xiaoling spoke in a frustrated way: can u tell me about the plan behind pangu.
renwang:ar sry but heaven secret . by the way all of u get ready as to nite we were goning to
defeat Jiang chen. as i noe his whereabouts cos of the info i get from pangu elder.
Fusheng:alrighty.. iwill call mao u and bu po also.
xiaoling: tianya u must take gd care of tian le and stay at waiting bar to nite...ok?
tianya :yes mon.
tonight everyone gather at waiting bar and get ready for the mission of killing Jiang chen lead by ren wang...
for chapter 3 i concluded again..
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Post by miracle on Feb 12, 2006 6:16:10 GMT -5
:)any comments feel free to tell me....
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