PLEASE READ MY VERSION OF MDWAV 4.. (NOT COMPLETED

[lovemdwav]

Actually hor, in the earlier month, I had written an actual story of MDWAV for my school friends, and as I am lazy to type them out (The story was quite long), I will try to give a brief summary of the story, and hope you guys can gimme some comments though..haha… Hope you guys won’t find the story boring.. Ok here it goes..

**I had added three new characters inside, namely, Shen Yong (Acted by Eric Wan), Mei Xing (Acted by Kylie Kwok) and Li Si. (Acted by the girl who acted as Ma Danna in MDWAV 2, I dunno her real name, sorry!)

My version of the series is like this:
Kuang Tian You and Ma Xiao Ling had returned to the mortal world and paid a special visit to see Fu Sheng, whom they had not seen for a long time. Both of them had a special surprise when they entered the house. As they went in further, they could hear Fu Sheng’s loud voice, coming from his bedroom. Xiao ling and Tian You looked at each other and stood behind a small pillar, just to see what Fu Sheng was up to. Surprisingly, they saw one beautiful girl inside, who was getting real close to Fu Sheng. They were smiling and chatting away happily. Tian you tried to interrupt Xiao ling’s attention but she hushed him and told him to keep quiet. Slowly, she went in and gave Fu Sheng a surprise.. Fu sheng was shocked at Xiao ling’s sudden appearance. He screamed for joy and hugged her and Tian You. They had missed each other so much! After all the huggings and greetings, Xiao ling looked at the unknown girl beside Fu Sheng, who looked kind of bewildered at this scene. Fu Sheng smiled sheepishly at her gaze. “Erm.. She is my girl friend, Mei Xing..” came his reply to Xiao ling. Both Tian You and Xiao ling was shocked. They did not know that Fu Sheng had a girl friend so fast, and they cannot believe it! Mei Xing was quite a quiet and gentle fellow who minded her manners well. She greeted Xiao Ling and Tian you and for the happiest day of their lives, they went out for a celebration.
In the later part of the series, Mei Xing was actually an evil character who was on a mission to kill Tian You. (aka Guo Hua) . She purposely got so close to Fu Sheng is because she wanted to complete her mission. In her heart, she do not have feelings for Fu Sheng at all. All she wanted was to try to find out every means and ways to kill Tian You. Needless to say, she was actually an ultimate and powerful vampire that one cannot imagine… and Fu Sheng did not know anything about this at all.

Everyday, Mei Xing just came for a visit to Fu sheng’s house. One day, she excused herself to the toilet. But actually, she went into the kitchen to poison Tian you. (As you know, vampires like Tian You drink blood, and they were usually stored in the fridge to keep it from going bad). Mei Xing knows exactly Tian you’s life, and she went to take the packet of blood and casted some deadly poison inside. Her plan actually succeeded. Tian You took it, and he lost all his vampiric powers. Everyday, he felt weak and Xiao Ling was getting worried for him. Tian you suddenly grew faint and fainted. Xiao ling could not stand this any longer. She knew something was wrong. Thus, she ordered Fu Sheng to take her tool box out and quickly, she found an antidote, in which hopefully, can revive Tian You’s system. However, this was a wrong move, and she deeply regretted this through her life. The antidote was actually exchanged by Mei Xing, and it contained poison, specially for vampires to go crazy, and Xiao ling did not know it at all..
Indeed, Tian You did went berserk. He went around throwing things and trashing every thing about, and even tried to strangle Xiao Ling. He had completely lost his mind, and did not know what he was doing. Xiao ling gasped for air and kicked about. “ Please, tian you.. let go of me..” she pleaded, but Tian you was nuts. He turned into a hideous vampire and bared his fangs at her.
Xiao ling looked on the ground and tried to reach for her long slayer sword. When she reached for it, she had tears in her eyes. She knew she had no choice now.. She pleaded with Tian you once more, but in vain. In the end, she closed her eyes and aiming the sword at Tian You.. “NO! XIAO LING JIE! YOU WILL KILL TIAN YOU GE!!” Fu Sheng screamed at the top of his voice, stopping Xiao ling from thrusting the sword into Tian you’s heart. Xiao ling ignored him, and with tears in her eyes, she painfully aimed it directly into Tian You’s heart… Tian You growled and suddenly, he looked at Xiao Ling painfully in the eyes.. “Xiao ling…” he said softly, as he fell. Xiao ling was shocked, and she let go of the handle of the sword she was holding onto. “Tian You? Tian You!” she shouted at him. But it was too late. Tian You soon perished and Xiao ling almost went berserk. She tried to kill herself but was stopped by Fu Sheng everytime. For Tian you’s death, she never forgave herself. She knew she had caused Tian you’s death. Everyday, she lived in a world of regrets and hatred. Her hopeless days finally came to an end when she finally got to know Shen yong in the story..

I think I will directly tell you how Shen Yong, the new character comes in, because it will really flood this forum if I continue with my exact storyline..
Shen Yong was actually Tian you’s reincarnation. I mean, the REAL tian you, who had died in England in MDWAV 2.. He was walking on the streets until he was spotted by Fu sheng, who looked shocked to see him. At first, Fu sheng still thought that it was actually Guo hua who was playing a joke on him. However, Shen Yong did not seem to recognize him and insisted that Fu Sheng had got the wrong person. In the later part, (I skip), there were actually attempts by Shen Yong, who pretended to be Tian You, just to make things better for Xiao Ling. Fu Sheng taught him how to act, dress and sound like Tian You. At first, Xiao ling was ignorant of this. (She locked herself in her room almost every day). Shen Yong was quite uneasy with this, but was soon get used to it by cheering her up everyday. He actually already had a girl friend in the series, but spent little time with her. Her girl friend’s name was Li Si. Her girl friend got angry when she knew about Xiao ling. Xiao ling was starting to believe that Shen Yong was indeed Tian You. (and Shen yong was getting quite worried for he did not want to replace Tian You’s position in her heart. He still love his girl friend, Li Si, very much, and did not have feelings for Xiao Ling at all).
In the later part, Tian You did came back in Xiao ling’s dream. It was a very touching scene whereby both of them meet, and Xiao ling was very happy. She shouted for his name and she hugged him. (Remember, they were in a dream). She told Tian You of her bitterness and how she never forgave herself for killing him. However, Tian You did not blame her at all. Instead, he stroked her face and hair, wanting to make Xiao ling promise him that she will take good care of herself and not to blame herself anymore. He even added that it pained his heart to see her in this state. Xiao ling was touched and Tian you handed her a small box and a necklace, saying it is for her, and she can only open the small box only in emergencies. Xiao ling was curious. But before she could do anything, Tian You was in a hurry, and he said he had to go. “Promise me, Xiao ling, you must take good care of yourself… I … Love… You..” and he just went further and further away from Xiao ling. Xiao ling grabbed the things that Tian You had given her tightly and that’s the moment when she woke up. She was full of sweat and she stared around her room for a while. She was quite disappointed that it was all a dream, until … …
As she got up from her bed, something dropped onto the floor. Picking it up, it was actually the things that Tian You had given her in her dream! The dream was real… and Tian You did indeed went to see Xiao Ling. Xiao ling looked at the shining necklace and behind it, carved the words “ Tian You and Xiao Ling”, with a heart shape in the middle. Xiao ling closed her eyes as she clutched the necklace and box near to her heart… …

(There are still lots more… but I will only continue if you guys like the story so far..)

[Hui Hui]

hehe..thanks..^_^.
by the way.i am in my school now..haha..shh..dun tell the teacher i secretly go this web..h
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haha..i am having english lesson now.then the teacher gonig thru essays.the essay got the name catherine...haha


oh ya..everyone listen up!!!
i read the story le..but hoh..i want to add this story into the ending of our sotry that we have just started..dun u guys feel it is a good idea?
if it is so..we continue our story first then when it is time to combine this story i will tell u all bahx..but we must write a lot in our story first before combining..

[Hui Hui]

quoted from dagpeter:
hey,lovemdwav,srry tat i havda continue ur story but from ur story.....can continued n add 2 the story so.....srry about tis "story-stealin"incident.......here i go !!!
Dagpeter continues this story by loveMDWAV,here it goes:
new character- sheng wang.
......Xiaoling close her eyes as she clutched the necklace and box near to her heart,crying out Tian you's name,hoping that he would return to her once again.But what is done is done and Mei Xing is planning a fool-proof plan to wipe out Xiaoling and her five years old daughter,Tianya.until now.........poor fu sheng was at a loss as he n shen yong continued to decieve Xiaoling.
meanwhile,jiang cheng has been awaken from his long slumber by Tianyi to destory the world once again.however,jiang cheng required three souls to perform his ritual to call back the long lost army of the undead.......(to be continued......)

chapter 2 : behind the doors of Li Si's house
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three days later,shen yong,accompany by Xiaoling,went to Li Si's place,hoping that he could explain everything clearly to Xiaoling and to stop Li Si from breaking up with him.when they arrived at Li Si's place,Xiaoling sense that something did not seen right but she could not explain the distubing feeling within her.it was as if that the answers that she had been seaching all her life is behind the front door,the distubing front door.in a matter of second,a strong gust swept pass sheng yong and Xiaoling.at that very same moment,Tian you's voice called out to Xiaoling,telling her not to open the door for what lies behind the door is more than what she had experinces in life,n it would also be more than what she could explain.dispited the warning given,she told sheng yong to open the door,not knowing what would happened next.........(to be continued)


chapter 3 :Li Si-the first sacrifice
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when they open the front door,they heard cries coming from Li Si's room.at first,sheng yong thought that Li Si was still mad at him for "cheating" Xiaoling n her feeling,but Xiaoling grew weaker and more afraid each time she takes a step closer to Li Si's room.
finally,Xiaoling pluck up the courage and went ahead,with sheng yong still in the kitchen preparin Li Si's favourite dishes,to open the door to Li Si's room.as she entered the room,Tian You's voice spoke to Xiaoling again,saying:"do not look directly into Li Si eyes until sheng yong return."she was puzzled by what she heard and she obeyed the voice.moments later,Li Si called out to Xiaoling but Xiaoling managed avoid directed contact with Li Si's eyes.but Li Si kept on pestering Xiaoling to look at her and to explain why did she steal her boyfriend away from her.after much pestering,Xiaoling could not resist and she look at her,prepared to tell her that sheng yong was Tian You.but immidiately after Xiaoling looked at her,the vampire's toxic in Xiaoling acted up again and she went to bite Li Si.at that moment,the first out of three soul had gone to be with jiang cheng.this time round,Xiaoling cried her heart out,knowing that she had kill someone.sheng yong hurried to Li Si's room to see what was happening,but he fainted upon what he saw as Xiaoling ran out of the room with blood coming out of her mouth and fangs.
but strangely,back in Xiaoling's house,young Tianya felt uneasy and scared,scared of her future and what it had install for her.............(to be continued....)

[dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie]

thanx,Hui Hui !!!! i hav more 2 continued but do i continued here n work lovemdwav or do i work alone 1st n kept on sendin my stories 2 u plz reply me A.S.A.P.,thanx.meanwhile i m gonna added more 2 the OUR combine story.........here i go.

[dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie]

chapter 4 : Li Si's devastation
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when sheng yong woke up and regained his alertness,he have mixed-feeling within him.on one hand he was afraid by what he saw moments ago,but on the contridiction,he felt as if a load of burden had just left him.a few seconds later,he went out of Li Si's room with a smile on his face,not knowin what really happened just now.
suddenly,just as he was about to leave the house,Li Si called out to him from the kitchen.sheng yong's heart was hit by torrents of fear as he replied back fearfully.sheng yong hurried to the phone and dial the police's hotline,but just as he was about to report this strange case,the phone was cut offline and it went dead.
fear hit him so hard that as if he was being ran down by a truck.then just as sheng yong was trying to sneak out of the house,something struck him hard and he was possessed.he walked into the kitchen half-heartedly and he saw Li Si cooking his favourite dish.sheng yong managed to overcome the possessed within him as he was reminded of all the good memories he and Li Si had in this small kitchen,tears was running down his cheek and he cried softly to himself before he obeyed the "thing" that was possessing him.just as he was about to face Li Si again,Li Si said to Sheng yong in a sweet tone:"have you eaten ? i have cooked your favourite dish,enjoy."
then the "thing" took control of sheng yong mouth as it gentled smoothed the "emotionally stirred up" soul.suddenly sheng yong spoke:"go in peace,i don't love you anymore,just leave me alone,please !"as he was saying this,tear flooded down his face and he was overwhelmed by his feelings.then Li Si gently took hold of sheng yong's hand,cried in slient devastation as she slowly faded away.just when Li Si was about disappeared,both of their soul beats as one and sheng yong kissed Li Si before she disappeared.finally,Li Si disappeared into thin air never to be seen by any one again.indeed,sheng yong did not saw her after that,but he knew that Li Si would always be in his heart forever and that Li Si heartbeat and memories has fused into one with him.he left the house with sorrows in his heart and a knife in his right hand,ready to kill Xiaoling for what she had done to Li Si.suddenly, something spoke to him and he tossed away the knife with tear still running down his face,reflecting on the past memories that he had shared with Li Si............(to be continued....)

[dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie]

a clue on wat's goin happened in the next chapter :
sheng wang will enter the story but tis time he has a mission.......wat's his mission n does he hav any motive stay tune 4 chapter 5-sheng wang became slayer

[dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie]

chapter 5 :Sheng wang became slayer
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back at the waiting bar,Mao You was teaching both Tianya and Tian Le how to make their mother's famous drink when Xiaoling rushed in with tears running down from her cheek and blood dripping out from her mouth.on the instant,Mao You sense that something did not seen right,she wanted to comfort Xiaoling but she dare not as she know that Xiaoling had became a vampire.just as Xiaoling was running back to her room,someone walked into the waiting bar sliently.on the very moment,Tianya took a cup and toss it right at the stranger,but the stranger reacted quick enough to avoid the "flying cup".Tianya took this moment to warn her "aunt" Mao You that there was a thief in the waiting bar,at first,Mao You thought that Tianya was refering to a customer.so she turned around only to realised a evil-looking,handsome young man.Mao You's heart beated really fast and she was blushing as the guy walked toward the bar table."may i know is Tian You in ?"said the guy,but Mao You was being captured by his appearance that he did not answer to that question."excuse me,young lady,may i know where is Tian You ?"this time,Tianya answered :"my mom told me that dad went on a long holiday and that he will never come back."
then just as when the guy was about to ask another question.Xiaoling came down,wiping the tears and blood of her face and said : "my husband is dead and he will never return !"a few second later,fu sheng ran down to comfort Xiaoling and told her that Tian You still exist and that she had just went out with him.but no lies last forever,Xiaoling accepted the very fact that Tian You was dead and that she would never forgave herself for killing her own husband.after moments of slient,Sheng wang told Xiaoling that he would like to be a slayer like Tian You as his life was saved by Tian You.Xiaoling did not answered him but she back to her room,took hold of their photo album and she began to cry sliently to herself as she look at the photos that they had taken together.then suddenly,Mao You came in and comforted Xiaoling,althought Xiaoling did not say anything but Mao you knew that deep within Xiaoling's heart,she still missed Tian You alot.
strangely,Xiaoling did not cry for long and she went down to accept sheng wang as her disciple.after Xiaoling accept Sheng wang as her disciple,Sheng wang explained to Xiaoling that he was an undercovered cop and why he came here to became a slayer,not a cop.after hearing what sheng wang had to say,Xiaoling hand over Tian You's most cherished slayer sword to sheng wang and told him to take good care of "Tian You's remain".
now,just as Xiaoling has accepted sheng wang,a strong feeling struck Tianya and she began to cry.this time round,not only Tianya felt it,even his brother felt it too.................. (to be continued.....)

[dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie]

a little review on wat actually happened 2 Tianyi (fate)---
every1 thought tat he died,but he managed 2 survive n when into hidin,plannin 2 strike again n to rebuild his own "eternal state".
NOTE :from tis point of progression in e story,we will see n read more abt Tian le until a few chapter later when he will die.i'll also bring back some of e past character from the previous series n e "past review" from e previous seires too.so..........enjoy !!!

[menvampire4eva]

sorry ah... but hu is tian le?

[dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie]

Tian le is Tianya's bro,any thing else u wanna ask me,hui hui or lovemdwav

[menvampire4eva]

haah.. i tot once the female give birth to a vampire.... the mother will die? den who is tian le de mother???

[dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie]

Xiaoling did not die.u'll find e rest of ur answer soon

[tianya]

nice plot. wondering if got chinese version cus the actual show is in chinese lol

=D

[joeyyuwei4886]

no cantonese better...haha

[dagpeter of The Arch - Thrie]

well.........actually tis is a singapore's version of mdwav IV,so not all tat u read r in e story.......but dun worry,i hav e storyline of HK version as my referance.so even if e story go out of e way,it wont go 2 out.(30% of my part of e story was actually taken from e HK version,i merely change e character n add in lots of plot,but e story base is still unchange.)