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Post by Hui Hui on Sept 10, 2005 7:03:09 GMT -5
hmm..more ppl pls contribute more speeches for this story...i think until my brain juice is dry.haha
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Post by chenxiang1 on Sept 10, 2005 7:32:45 GMT -5
haha...I'll see what I can write...might not be gd...btw who's auntie Jia?Do I call her auntie Jia?If you could edit my this post den u edit already reply in red....den i continue my story in blue....
oh ya..i forgot to say that auntie jia is mum of wang zhen zhen
orh...ok...thanks..i noe how continue le....let me think den i modify my post againwhoa...u write so many singlish ah..haha..i help u modify a little
haha...i Singaporean, no choice....btw u edit where???
Xiao Ling, Tian You, their 2 children and Xiao Ling's 2 disciple were ready to set off to go to Aunt Jia's house/Zhen Zhen's house.
10 minutes later, all 7 of them arrived at Aunt Jia's house.
Xiao Ling: Tian Ya, Tian Le, call Auntie.
Tian Ya/Tian Le : AUNTIE HELLO!!!!!
Tian You/Xiao Ling/XL's disciples : Auntie......
Auntie Jia : Tian Ya, Tian Le, "guai"(good).Everyone, go in and have a seat.Can help yourself to the drinks also.
Everyone:Thank you....
Tian Ya and Tian Le ran to the table and got themselves each a packet of drinks and went to ask Tian You and Xiao Ling helped them open.Tian You and Xiao Ling helped them open and then went to take drinks for Zheng Zhong, Miaow~ie, Fusheng and themselves before sitting down with Aunt Jia.Tian Le and Tian Ya drank finish their drinks and then they started running around the house.
Xiao Ling:Tian Ya, make sure you take care of di-di(brother) ah, don't let him get injured.And careful don't make break Auntie's things.Ok?
Tian Ya:Ok, Mummy.
Xiao Ling then returned to the conversation with the rest.....
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Post by Hui Hui on Sept 11, 2005 2:10:33 GMT -5
haha...looks like u get the hook of writing this story..and it seems cute...
"Ding Dong!"The door bell rang.
"Hi everyone!"An unknown girl stepped into the room.
Tian Ya and Tian Le:Hi Sister Zhen Zhen!
Tian You asked curiously:Who is she?
Xiao Ling said:Oops,hi!(said to Tian Ya and Tian Le)She is not Sister Zhen Zhen.(introduced to everyone)She is one of my school friend.She is called Su Wei Lai.
Wei Lai smiled shyly:Hi everyone!So sorry to interrupt you guys.Xiao Ling invited me.
The door opened again and this time Zhen Zhen came back,she brought Wen Long along with her.
Xiao Ling was excited and hugged Zhen Zhen:Zhen Zhen!You are finally back!Do you know I miss you so much!(shouted towards Tian Ya and Tian Le who are playing at the side)Tian Ya!Tian Le!Come and call Sister Zhen Zhen!
Tian Ya and Tian Le shouted together:Sister Zhen Zhen!
Zhen Zhen was stunned,said:Whose kids are these?They are so adorable.(fidgeting Tian Ya and Tian Le's hair)
Tian You stood up and walked beside Xiao Ling:(pointing the two children)These two kids are Xiao Ling and mine.This is called Tian Ya,the smallest is called Tian Le.They are 5 and 2 years old.
Zhen Zhen looked at Tian You's eyes in amazement and she noticed Xiao Ling was smiling happily to Tian You,she quickly changed the subject:Oh ya,forget to introduce to everyone.This is my new boyfriend,Su Wen Long.
Wen Long:Hi,everyone!
Wei Lai turned around and was stunned,she ran towards Wen Long and hugged him:Cousin!
Everyone answered:Cousin?
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Post by chenxiang1 on Sept 11, 2005 5:02:02 GMT -5
haha.....Su Wen Long lky Yao Wen Long...maybe can gt YWL play s SWL....eh let me type Singlish...haha, but den u 1 edit go ahead...my english standard drop liao...type too much Singlish..haha...TY and TL call someone else ZhenZhen....if reli in e show i'll luff till pengz
Wen Long:Yah, she's my cousin.You all don't know ah?
Wei Lai:Xiao Ling, you don't know ah?
Xiao Ling laugh and said:I don't know.But no need introduce us le, since everyone knows each other.
Auntie Jia:Oh ya, Wei Lai, Wen Long and Zhen Zhen, go and sit down.Dinner will be served in a while.
Auntie Jia went to the kitchen and touched up all the dish before serving.
Auntie Jia:Dinner is READY!!Everyone come and eat.
Everyone:Coming.....
Tian Le and Tian Ya rushed to the table and tried to take a chicken wing to eat.Xiao Ling saw it and beat their hands lightly.
Xiao Ling:You two ah, never go and wash hands. after playing and also must wait till everyone is sitted and call the elders to eat before you can eat.Go wash your hands now.
Tian Ya and Tian Le:Yes, mummy.
The rest all sat at the table waiting for Tian Ya and Tian Le to come back.Both of them came back and dinner started.
Xiao Ling:Tian Ya, Tian Le, call auntie and uncle to eat.
Tian Ya and Tian Le:UNCLE, AUNTIE, PAPA, MUMMY EAT!
The others except TL/TY/Auntie Jia/ZhenZhen:Auntie eat!
ZhenZhen:Mummy, eat.
Auntie Jia:Everyone "guai"(good)(she treated them as small kids..haha).Everyone eat.
Everyone started eating......
oh my..such a touching scene man..make me feel like crying and laughing at the same time..so touching touching?where???
touching in a way that the whole family is humorous and it is a bless the family can talk in such a funny and cute tone that sounds harmonious...
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Post by Hui Hui on Sept 11, 2005 5:50:27 GMT -5
i feel that we wrote in a very cute way...dun u think?
On the dining table,
Miaow~ie is feeding Tian Le.
Xiao Ling passed a sthingyful of vegetables to Tian Ya's plate .
Tian Ya started to groan:Yucks!Mummy!I don't want to eat these veggies!
Tian You advised her:Good girl,Tian Ya.Veggies are good for you.
Zhen Zhen:Tian Ya,be good.If you eat these veggies,sister Zhen Zhen will give you a present later,okay?
Tian Ya started to eat her veggies quietly.
Zheng Zhong:Oh ya,Zhen Zhen.This time you come back is for what reasons ah?When are you going back?
Zhen Zhen replied:I miss all of you ah!
Xiao Ling asked:How's you all have been doing?
Zhen Zhen smiled:I have been doing fine.All thanks to Wen Long.He takes care of me when I am sick.
Wen Long held her hands and said:Oh ya,we have a good news to tell everyone.Zhen Zhen and I are going to get married!
Everyone was shocked and said:Really?
Except for Tian You,he just looked at Zhen Zhen and Wen Long with two round eyes.
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Post by chenxiang1 on Sept 12, 2005 10:20:54 GMT -5
haha...i find it funny....haha..i am drinking water when i read this passage.make me laugh until almost spit out my water .....haha....the muscle tt part de?
Xiaoling saw what happened and put her hands in front of Tian You.Tian You still did not respond. Now everyone was looking at Tian You curiously. Xiaoling started to shake Tian You and calling out his name.
Xiaoling: Tian You!!!Tian You!!You alright???Don't scare me, Tian You....
At this point, Tian You came to sense and saw everyone looking at him.
Tian You: Why all of you looking at me in this manner?
Xiaoling: You sure you alright?
Tian You: Yah, I'm alright.See, I still very healthy and strong. *Tian You flexes his muscle*
Tian Ya: Eh, Papa, why your muscle so small one?
Tian You looked at his biceps.
Tian You:haha.Sorry ah.Because I have not been training for a long time but my leg muscles surely very good.Espcially with you two kids keep making me running in the house to get you two to bath, change in new clothings or even sleep.
Everyone start to burst out into laughter.....
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Post by lovemdwav on Sept 14, 2005 4:06:18 GMT -5
HAhahaa!!! This story is getting so funny! Really eh..its a very cute story, but I have got one doubt leh..its that Tian You in the real MDWAV series got so funny one meh? Still flex muscles some more...(Laughs)..u know, I laughed so loud like siao that my father stare at me..hahaha..!! But I believe that u are writing the real side of eric wan bahz..cos he real life is like that de, so funny...but Tian You, I dont think so..cos he is always so quiet, and seems strict..he is a very serious person who seldom smiles..So I dun think he will be able to flex his muscles for his kids to see..haha..but anyway, its a VERY INTERESTING story.~!! I can tell u, I love it! and if one day, this story is completed, I suggest lets go and look for contacts of Chen Shi San, and send him this to read lahz.. (but he knows how to read english hor?) We write so many broken english, I dun think dey from HK can understand us leh...they mite be thinking, whats "leh", "lah", "meh"..blah..etc...lolz! You both are getting so cute, full of creativity, simply making Tian You such a cute and funny character..so hui hui, u wanna combine my ending hah? ok, lets wait for that day, for I am always looking forward to the finished masterpiece. ( Anyway, I really hope that this story turn into one of the MDWAV, cos it sure will be a very humurous!) Im surprised of both of you de talents..
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Post by chenxiang1 on Sept 15, 2005 11:11:26 GMT -5
By the way, all the setting in this story is take place in which country?
At around 10pm , Xiaoling, Tianyou, Tianya, Tianle, Zheng Zhong and Miaow~ie were all getting ready to go back home. They bade everyone 'goodbye' and left the house. While leaving the building, Xiaoling detected a strong vampire aura coming from nearby.
Xiaoling:Tianyou, I'm sensing a very strong vampire aura in this area. Miaow~ie, you follow Tianyou, Tianya and Tianle back home first. Zheng Zhong, follow me to check out what happened and Tianyou, meet here after you've sent them back and leave Miaow~ie to take care of the two kids.
Tianyou:Got it. Quickly, follow me.
Miaow~ie, Tianle and Tianya followed Tianyou back to the car and went back home.
Xiaoling:Ok, Zheng Zhong lets go.
Zheng Zhong followed Xiaoling to where Xiaoling's instinct told her the vampire is. They walked towards a shopping mall and saw many people around that area are running here and there. Xiaoling and Zheng Zhong immediately run up to check the situation there and saw a vampire trying to bite the civilians. Xiaoling immediately took out her toolbox(or cosmetic box as she called it) and prepare to defeat the vampire.
can someone plz continue the fight?I don't know what to write?
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zijing
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Post by zijing on Sept 15, 2005 20:51:41 GMT -5
very cute leah..
ahahha....
stupid...
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Post by Hui Hui on Sept 16, 2005 20:52:50 GMT -5
here ends episode two le bahx...^_^
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